More Than One Weekend
Howatt, Zach
Grade: 12
School: Northern Cass
Public School, Hunter ND
Educator: Brittany
Breiland
AWARD: Gold Key, flash fiction
They both had paper name tags pressed to their chests– the
tour guide insisted she know everyone’s names, even though they would only be
on campus for one weekend– but the mother had simply written on hers (in lower
case letters) “parent” to deter confusion, while the daughter’s tag was
completely blank. There wasn’t anything to be done about that.
She and her mother had broken unceremoniously from the pack,
leaving the Memorial Union to have a chat outside. The folders, flyers,
t-shirt, and tuition pricing flopped over the girl’s folded arms like
fly-attracting salmon drying in the heat of the day.
“So what do you like about NDSU?” asked the mother.
There was no use expecting any answer other than “I don’t
know.” The mother knew this, and at the very least did her best not to prod or
press too hard. She shared so many traits with her daughter– her curly blonde
hair, her interest in romance novels, her favorite foods– that she sometimes
struggled with entertaining the thought that their minds still ran on separate
tracks.
In the girl’s opinion, judging by the monotonous tour and
the shreddable papers in her arms, North Dakota was South Dakota was Minnesota,
New York, California, Texas. Factors and stats discernible within only 5% were
not enough to lure her in any direction.
As she thought about this, her eye wandered from the cracks
in the sidewalk to a little boy in a bike helmet waiting at a nearby crosswalk.
He clutched his tasseled handlebars while eagerly pressing the magic button
that would grant him passage across the street. His parents were close behind,
pushing baby strollers.
The mother and daughter soon passed the site of a humming,
orange construction site, in which jovial men leaped into their Bobcats to
continue their job. They passed a handsome fraternity house “that brotherhood
built” surrounded by cleanly trimmed shrubs. The girl eyed a group of young
guys in tanks working together to replace a section of their patio. She looked
away, pretending to notice a butterfly, when one guy gave her a flash of a
smile and a wave.
“Well, start that decision-making,” said her mother, not
firmly.
The girl was within inches of her mother, but suddenly felt
like she had been miles away. Returning to the conversation, she felt a new
weight to the items in her arms. She squinted past the green boulevard into the
golden fields in the distance– not straw, as she originally thought, but gold.
A brisk-walking boy in a striped t-shirt approached
her.
“Hello,” he said, startling the mother. “Here you go.”
In his hands– and
now in the daughter’s– was a crisp one-dollar bill.
The girl hardly skipped a
beat to say politely, “Thank you.”
Without an explanation, yet bearing plenty
of explanation to the girl, the boy walked away.
The girl couldn’t help but
halt. She considered the environment. The mother, disoriented as her daughter,
stopped to check for certain if a random North Dakotan stranger had, in fact,
just given away a dollar to someone on the street. Even the air, in its perfect
summer warmth, lingered in its path.
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