Finding Freedom on the Red Rocket
Gold Key
Author: Wesley
Kemp
12th
Grade
Educator: Geri Beckman
Cavalier
Riding a bicycle is a skill that is difficult to learn, and
yet, the skill is also one that you do not forget since it is often the first
step to mobility freedom. Freedom does not come without the cost of pain and
adversity in form of scraped knees and bruised elbows. The “Red Rocket” was my
ride to freedom.
While living in Lamoure, my parents tried to shop locally as
often as they could - and my new bike purchase was no different. With my tennis shoes tied and my little
sister strapped into her stroller, my mom and I headed out to peruse the
selection of bicycles at the local hardware store. I was like a kid waiting for
Christmas morning and couldn’t wait to see what the backroom of the hardware
store contained. I anxiously waited for the store owner, Brad, to finish with
another customer before he took me by the hand to finally select my chariot. Brad
showed me big bikes and little bikes, purple bikes, blue bikes, bikes with
baskets, and bikes with bells. With so many selections, I didn’t think I would
ever be able to select my new ride. Until with a twinkle in his eye that
resemble Santa, Brad rolled my perfect ride from behind a twenty-speed bike.
With dark black wheels just my size, the bike was a dark crimson with yellow
words, which I couldn’t yet read. Brad told me that the bike was the “Red
Rocket” and would allow me to fly down the hill from my house to the local
park. With confidence, I wheeled my new chariot out to the main floor
of the store where my mom and little sister were waiting patiently. My mom paid for the “Red Rocket” as well as
new helmet. Unfortunately, my mom wouldn’t let me try riding my bike home and
made me wait patiently for my dad to arrive home from school.
It wasn’t long before my dad was walking through the gate and
admiring my new bike. With helmet in
strapped tightly in place, my mom gave me one last warning, “Be careful. Watch where you are going and make sure to
keep your hands on the handlebars.” (I had developed a habit of riding my old
tricycle with no hands, so the reminder was probably needed.) With a push of my
left foot, I began with a shaky start but was soon a speeding bullet riding
down the gravel alley. The wind rushed through the holes on my new helmet, and
I felt like I was speeding along without a care in the world. My newly found
freedom was exhilarating - for a short moment anyway before being replaced with
terror. An obstacle had suddenly jumped into the path of the “Red Rocket” as a
pine tree suddenly appeared before me. A towering rugged timber, the tree was
filled with a thick layer of needles and low lying branches. Frantically, I
tried to swerve to avoid a stout limb and briefly celebrated my success in
avoiding a terrible collision. Unfortunately, I over-corrected the “Red Rocket”
and steered directly into the trunk. Crash!
The “Red Rocket” slammed into the tree as I screamed “ OOOOOOOOO Mommmmmmmmmmmmmmmyyyyyyyyy.”
From near the driveway, my mom came rushing to the site of the accident. As I
cried from the intense pain and the sight of my blood, my mom carried me back
up the alley to our own driveway.
Although I was sure I had ridden far from home on my voyage, I hadn’t
even made it to the end of the block.
My mom sent me to the house to clean up while she retrieved
the “Red Rocket” from under the tree. As
I cleaned my hands and face, I gazed into the mirror to assess my injuries.
With just a few scratches and bruises, I had managed to escape my collision
relatively unscathed. Satisfied with myself, I smiled into the large glass
mirror and was suddenly shocked by a crater in my right cheek. Where did this
dent come from? I ran to find my parents
to report the damage to my face - which I was sure was a permanent injury. My father responded, ”The dent in your face
must have been caused by running into the tree.¨ Although I had stopped crying already, I
began to whimper again as I feared a facial deformity. Soon, I began to howl as
the thoughts began to pour into my head. I knew from experience that kids can
be mean and feared about being made fun of for a hole in my cheek. I chastised
myself for going so fast on my first solo ride. After seeing my distress, my
mom said, “Honey, you have always had a dent in your check. It’s just a
dimple.” Although I wanted to believe her, how could I have never noticed a
dent in my cheek before today? Pictures from my baby book were found, and my
parents eventually got me to calm down by proving to me that my dimple had
always been there.
After my “horrific” experience on my first ride, I waited
until the next afternoon to attempt to ride my bike again. I had learned my
lesson the day before and carefully took my time to get ready for my second
ride. I was more cautious when I took off from the safety of my garage. I
creeped down the gravel alley. In fact, I traveled so slowly that I began
swaying and wobbling. I swerved desperately to try to keep my balance. Although
I missed the pine tree from the day before, I met up with a telephone pole
instead. Crash! My bike fell to the
dusty jagged gravel with me underneath it. The pain of yesterday was forgotten
as I was now in more pain than before. This time, my dad was there to carry me
back home as I continued to cry into his shoulder.
Although my speed was much less than the day before, I wasn’t
as lucky; my legs were gushing blood from scrapes that looked like tenderized
meat. My skin was red and covered with jagged rocks that were digging into my
skin. When I got home, my mother made me take a bath to clean up the cuts and
gently removed the little pieces of rock and gravel from my scrapes. I
whimpered quietly.
The “Red Rocket” sat in the garage for a few weeks after that
second day of riding. I wasn’t sure that
I wanted the freedom if the cost was so high. I had to let my wounds heal up
and rebuild my confidence by going back to my little bike with training wheels.
Learning to ride a bicycle is the first step to freedom for many young
children; however, the newly found freedom often results in lesson of pain and
adversity as well. I eventually conquered riding the “Red Rocket,” and soon I
was able to ride down the street for an ice cream cone. The lessons learned
during the early days of my relationship with the “Red Rocket” have stayed with
me still today -- caution is needed when learning new skills; however,
persistence does pay off in the end.
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